yup the need is change..very well wriiten:)

yup a change is required

Typical Teen/yooung adult life :) I enjoyed it !

liked it a lot... sum times u r going through sum blogs n suddenly u stop n read sum thng wich makes u like its my stry its my life... its like u can connect wid d blogger's writing...

Nice poem with very crisp lines conveying the idea well.

Wow! very good one. Co-relating city life to Change was amazing!

@the crtics : thanks a lot :)

@Saket: I am happy that you enjoyed reading it :)

@Fly like a bird: I am happy you could connect to my writing :) :)

@The Fool : thanks :)

@Antony: thanks a lott!! :)

Nice change, I loved this poem, nice nice nice.. Smiles, mine is what most people feel in their heart but no one acts to achieve it, Change

Someone is Special

Counting the stars,
sleeping in arms,
mischief in the eyes,
catching dandelions.


beautiful words and apt too.
Change is the need of the hour

@Someone is Special : :) thanks!

@ Md. Muddassir Shah : thanks!

very beautiful words and very apt in the current corporate world... would have loved the last line to be "time to change"

loved the flow in your poem and even I believe we need a change.

Indeed there is a special need for change especially in the corporate sector. In a very subtle manner you surely have touched a common chord there , with many a people at once. I liked it. All the best

@Aashish: I will CHANGE it :)Thanks btw

@Pratibha: thanks dear :)

@Maverick : No one says it, but every one feels the need. I have just put into words. I am happy to know that you could connect to it. :)

thats a very different perspective of writing a poem.loved to read it. i dont write as good as like u awesome people and i havnt written this much but yeah i wud wish that once i also get to know that hows my poems are? :)

@some unspoken words : Thanks dear. You are just pulling my leg, there are stalwarts out there, I am just an amateur writer who is no where near being awesome.

You write well. :) Keep writing :)

So much said!

You are one of the few bloggers to hav exploited the Word "Change" very well.

@ sneha i m pulling ur leg.. i really liked the way u write.. u r also one of those stalwarts. in fron u i m lil child who has just learnt standing on her feet in the word of writing... thanks :)

@Viyoma: I am happy you feel so! :) Thanks dear :)

@some unspoken words: You think very high of me! Thank you, it is humbling to know. Thanks :)

Nice poem..and describes so well the automated and monotonous life and very rightly suggested too the need for change :)

@Alcina : thanks dear :)

Lovely poem
This is the routine of almost many here.... being exhausted and having no time/energy to devote for a change... it gets difficult....

@Anuradha: its time to change. Do something that you have always desired to, but have not.

:)

Thanks :) :)